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Post by Gabby on Oct 30, 2009 17:15:55 GMT -8
White clouds on my lips
snowflakes glow like fireflies
with the rising sun. |
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Post by Del on Oct 30, 2009 18:18:28 GMT -8
Lovely.
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Post by turkoizdog on Oct 30, 2009 20:47:19 GMT -8
I love it. It actually sounds like a haiku. Whenever I try haikus, they never sound like haikus. Although that's probably because they're not too poetic or descriptive, just kinda angsty lol. Then again, I haven't attempted a haiku in years... I like the second line especially  |
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Post by Gabby on Oct 31, 2009 10:02:55 GMT -8
Yay. Thanks you two. : )
It's based off of something I actually saw. It was nothing short of magical.
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